Sounds like a pretty decent team but what is in your sub slot? If it is all the characters you listed i think you should put escanor in sub and god eliz in 1 of the main slots with estarossa and tarmiel.
@Rooney213457 I actually use red zeldris myself as my sub in pvp but i think his commandment is more useful because if he is alone its pretty easy for his attacks to combine itself and even his bronze cards are pretty useful because it stops the enemies ultimate when it comes to a 1v1 and healing with skills. It's not necessary to combine cards by yourself with zeldris which will make it more likely for the opponent to combine skills which will make the commandment more useful.